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The Truth and Nothing but the Truth 3-8 Presented by Brian Heinz

The revision process raises resistance in young writer's. What should be changed, added, deleted... and why? A professional writer demonstrates simple and powerful models, templates, and strategies that strip away the mystique surrounding revision that will enable young writers to work as young professionals.

Resource packet will be scanned and and attached.

Mr. Heinz discussed ways to get students to be more specific with their nouns and verbs, making more exact choices, helps both the reader and the writer.

His example was a a student writing a story about a boy on a boat in a lake. He used the chart enclosed to generate sensory details.